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 Ya'll really believed I'd kill off my favorite emo asshole that quickly? >B) Neeehhhh~ 

Tried two little adjustments with this page; more panels for quicker scene transitions and trying thicker lines for
things I want more focus to be on. Moving scenes along with more panels seems to be doing just fine (because originally
I was going to expand this scene with Aero and that train to the bottom of this page into the top-half of the next, scrapped
it and did this instead. Which I think is better and not 'dragging'), the line thickness in some parts also seems to be doing
something but once I began adding color it appears to get lost in some areas.

So I'll ask you guys, are these changes noticeable? Does it make it any better? o3o

Also Awesome  feature tiem!:


When anyone ever does farts for me, know I will always show them off because...just..omg.. thanks! Means a lot \;w;/

**And also special thanks to for translating the Russian phrase at the bottom! ^.^

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